In our Reading workshop with Koka Ngaire, she told us to rewrite a shortened version of the year nine's looong article in one small paragraph. Below is what I wrote:
"To Waste Our Life"
The Plastic, Or The Fish?
Although online shopping is cheap, and sometimes easy, it isn't the healthiest and most ideal thing for the environment.
The littlest thing can make a big difference.
All around the globe, people spend up to $3.6 billion on online shopping. What are we doing? We are wasting our money on things we don't need, and depending on how much "plastic" wrapping is on your parcel, you're technically buying the plastic. This present day, citizens and people around the world are trying to stop this, and we need to, but not all agree with that; not all want that. We are not surviving this, and neither are the fish.
Thank you for reading my blog, Kale'a🐈
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